O V E R A L L I M P R E S S I O N: T O P 4 %
C O N C E P T: T O P 4 %
P L O T: T O P 4 %

This is a really fun and enjoyable read. The concept is smart and excites us right from the beginning. There’s the fact that so many of us suffer from student debt, and that makes the story highly relatable right off the bat. The story features a great cat and mouse game. Keith is actively hunting Chas, and that is exciting to watch and keeps the stakes high.

The plot is well crafted and already works extremely well. The setup is simple but effective.

Structurally, the script is in good shape as well. The structure ensures that the story moves in the most interesting way possible and stays logical. That is certainly the case here. Every scene causes the next, and the story moves forward with urgency. There is a clear trajectory, and the stakes are high and continue to heighten throughout.

The concept is cleverly conceived and works very well. The concept is simple and straightforward, and that makes it so effective. What makes a concept and script successful is the relatability of the story, and that is absolutely given here.

Overall, the script is in great shape and very entertaining.